SOURCES: Must be 3 sources: 1 website, 1 magazine, 1 newspaper!
FORMAT: Should be work cited page!
INSTRUCTIONS NOT FOLLOWED: Essay must be definition argument essay using the same topic! Must have a HOOK, after hook must have an OLD DEFINITION and BACKGROUND and STRONG CLAIM in the introduction part! Must be 2 reasons, evidence, counterargument and rebuttal! Conclusion should be more stronger!
OTHER: Should work on writing skills, style, tone, persuasiveness! Most importantly, essay MUST have a NEW DEFINITION for DEMOCRACY (not just a definition or explanation to democracy)!!! Essay is not for political Science class so its meaning shouldn’t go deeply to political Science as if it’s for not English class!