I expect this paper to be written based on my provided paper ( I have attached a file , please take a look). I require a minimum of 8 cited sources, if you found ANY additional information that hasn’t been cited such as statistics of any kind PLEASE cite them ! Along with this I NEED the following ( very important) : 1) to expand your ideas to the thesis which is : ” breaches in internet security exposes businesses and its customers leading to potential threats, leaked information and customer insecurity. 2)Topic sentences! I really need them to be clear! exactly tell me in what sentence what the paragraph is about. 3) I also require evidence/support/explanation as to “why” what you cited belongs in the paragraph or paper. Please note: my research proposal is to be handed in to a Canadian college, I really expect that sort of style to take place in my paper !!!
